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Who is Bob? A lil explanation of my story/ what i wish to accomplish before the story begins See below |
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I will start by telling you what this isn't ...no I'm not the greatest at grammar,punctuation etc. So please contain your inner grammar nazi. I will try to run it through various screens to catch these problems. I'm obviously not a professional writer Second this isn't Shakespeare...William or fuck even Travis. It's an exercise to get my mind engaged ,so I can write that longer story and..omg..get something published. I need to get use to getting stuff down on paper. I also find that it's hard to write smut if you don't have that person to channel it/ tailor it for. So as the story progresses I'd enjoy hearing feedback or what you might enjoy seeing. So treat this like last call at the bar and lower your expectations.. Yet keep your hormones high. You might just score. So okay....what is Bob then you might ponder. I say forget Joseph Campbell and his " hero's journey " bullshit. Something George Lucas heavily glommed onto for the creative process of making " starwars". Which is sus considering how lil writing and character development Lucas actually did. Bob is a submissive. I feel like a beta male doesn't need to save the girl,stop the bad guy,etc... To be a " man". Doesn't even need to be the hero/lead/ main character. The story can be filled with people more powerful than him. And i think this is a lesson that men will eventually learn. You can go on a journey of self discovery.. Without being the hero... Hence I think it would be fun to center the story on the Dominants and then let Bob.. Be Bob and steal some scenes..let him meander through this new environment called bdsm and find his own way across Who is Bob? I envisioned Bob to be between the ages of 35-45. Already submissive and in a lifestyle marriage. But one where the Domination is very lite and more sexual. And maybe..like most guys..secretly wish for more? I picture Bob as your average guy that labels himself submissive. But is he really? Does he really understand what that means? Or what being submissive means to other Dominants? And what would happen if someone put him on a journey to see how submissive he could actually become. What If Bob had to get out of his comfort zone and suddenly had to serve other Dominants. And whereas the Wife is Dominate...sometimes Dominants dont like the process to get to the end result. Don't like discipline,are afraid of whipping their male for example.. And would prefer someonelse train/ condition the male to be a complete slave.. Or what i call..a right out of the box slave male..no whipping requirred..lol. They want the complete worshipping male without the hassle of putting in the work...the Goddess type. I envisioned Bob's wife to be like this. Doesn't that sound fun? They say if your gonna write then you got to know your audience. I think for "Bob" and alot of other stories rolling around in my head, the audience will obviously be older sub men. But i believe others may also enjoy the story because i present the Dominants as..omg.🤗🤗🤗.real people. They arent 19 yrs old,a size 0,120lbs soaking wet. The Dominants will be older( 50-65),real sized,dressed in regular attire..( and yes bob like me..Will be attracted to them) So no thigh highs needed. Bob won't be a 20 yr old gym rat. He might even have a dad bod. He may not even see himself as a " stud". But where society may not see him as " brad pitt".. He will warmly welcomed/ desired in his submissive form. And i think this change is important to a man as he ages. Alot of guys just give up/ dont care cause they are already married. But how wonderful it is the be ignored by society and then coveted by those in the lifestyle.. The story will also adopted my personal theory that the submales is just a empty vessel waiting to be filled. Instead of the sub coming with a laundry list of needs and desires. I feel like he should present himself as humble and just wanting to serve. And allow the Dominant to decide how best they wish to use the male for their needs. For Dominants in the story will use Bob differently. I feel like a male just needs to roll with it and obey. Become the form that the Dominant desires. Stop obsessing that you need someone to fulfill your fetish of feet and pink unicorns. Instead become that ..bull,that sissy,that pain slut,that..well pink unicorn that they need. My story will..ofcourse contain some lgbtq stuff.. For as much as I feel too many males are stuck on their lifestyle journeys.. Alot of them also are stuck sexually And really have a hard time processing being into other men...even as a part that they channel as submission. Where as to someone like myself...the gender of the Dominant doesnt matter. But i think alot of people would enjoy seeing Bob navigate these waters.. It might even help them with their own personal journey. As you can tell this will be more than just smut. Maybe it is a teaching momment.. I think you'll enjoy Bob because it is what I call " surreal realism"... No nobody is going to do extremes. By this i mean presenting something out of your normal comfort zone as very casual. And it will feature real life people... Who will be desired,wanted. Sorry for being long winded.
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