Blog : Kinda funny we can't have adult conversation on here..did it turn you on

7123 posts
11/13/2023 3:58 am

Kinda funny we can't have adult conversation on here..did it turn you on

I'm literally surprised 220 some people actually clicked on,read portions of or all that rambling...

And can't even have the common courtesy to say if it they had interest in the story...

Which doesn't make you...well anything..

I can enjoy a fun female sub getting spanked at a play party...i can freely admit that I enjoyed it....but it doesn't make me a Dom nor straight..

Like I wrote earlier..I need to tighten the story up...so it can be a nice tight one
And sell to some website...
So someone can get off.
This isn't Shakespeare..hell it isn't even the marvels

I was mearily " freeballing" with alt and hoping to get some sort of feedback.

likesmatures 55M

4852 posts
11/13/2023 4:04 am

And I'm not even referring to the erotic stuff..

Do you like the concept of a fish out of water...someone sorta new to the lifestyle,eager to learn meeting this couple for a dinner party

sissy_sally_69 54M

258 posts
11/13/2023 5:17 am

Ok, I read it and I'll comment.

Yeah it looks like the groundwork for an interesting story.

I think you were putting too much concern into if it sounded gay or not.

Who cares

You're writing the story for you, not what the masses think.

Who gives a shit that there's so much homofobia around here, which I have run into myself.

IF you wrote the story revolving around a woman character as the center, everyone would be all over it because we all know, chick on chick is cool and great, dude on dude, not so much.

Do you man, write what you want to write and screw the popular opinion.

wantingnoregrets 64M

805 posts
11/13/2023 5:45 am

You might try literotica.com. they have many genre to cover just about every erotic keep for storytelling, it is also a free site to post that. They also have people that work as editors and so on that can bounce ideas around with you.

drmgirl622 68F

26132 posts
11/13/2023 6:30 am

I read your story and tried to turn it around in my head to represent Domme/female sub.

likesmatures 55M

4852 posts
11/13/2023 7:30 am

First off I'm not worried about a story being gay or sounding too gay..

But alot of my blog readers tend to be straight..

I doubt if my readers will plunge headfirst into a story where the chef/hubby plans on gangbanging the server..

So I tried to cushion it a bit..

And just because I'm gay and comfortable with it..

Doesn't mean I disapprove of anyone that isn't

I was just looking for some feedback

boh99 68M

3154 posts
11/13/2023 9:21 am

I think if you can capture the seduction, it will be successful

likesmatures 55M

4852 posts
11/13/2023 10:42 am

I tend be very casual with people..whether dating,play,sex...etc
To me it makes sense,feels good,not a biggie..

And this attitude will be reflected in the server..

He made be new to local scene but it's not his first rodeo..

And most likely used to men hitting on him..

So for some audiences this may seem a bit taboo..

And for others? .it's no big deal, he is comfortable around other men,he is comfortable with his sexuality..

So it's natural if the chef tries to seduce the server..


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