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Second part continuation of the story FOUR From the moment they woke me. t obvious this going to be a very different day Once I had finished breakfast, I recall a lovely omelette they allowed me to use a toy to masturbate while they completed the medical tests. I no longer embarrassed to masturbate with others in the room watching me or even their lewd comments at my orgasm. Then they me to a lovely room One I’d never seen before, fully kitted out like spa, like some up market classy salon, I relaxed happily as clad in their crisp white overalls, beauticians saw to my nails , my make up, all after myhair washed and cut and had been blow dried, so very fluffy and feminine in the mirror. Not my usual style at all! Then I dressed, pretty pretty lingerie but so silky, so sensual it just seemed to heightened my awareness of my sensitised body as I zipped into a classic figure hugging black cocktail dress then shoes that could have been made to measure. The other side of the salon they were preparing another who I knew slightly, Number Nineteen Her short clinging cocktail dress a creamy ivory satin The women fussed around us, chattering, but never to me or Nineteen . I felt the back of my hair lifted clear as one of them fastened a broad leather neck collar with TWENTY THREE in clear gold lettering glistening as I gazed at my image in the mirror, Two managers came in and a woman I didn’t know stood back reverentially while reporting to them “ They are both ready now, as you see. Both have already masturbated and I’m sure both girls are beautifully lubricated” I didn’t feel the slightest flicker of shame hearing her words. God how I seem to have changed. We were led to a waiting room, , teetering in our extreme heels down the long carpeted corridor . A 5 star hotel feel of quiet luxury. A man I had never seen before, , good cool confident kind of guy gave us each two tiny yellow pills and had us swallow then. I in a bit of a dream, sitting, utterly relaxed almost basking in the warm sensuality of my body, my outfit, of the setting when I brought back to reality by the sound of a low shuddering moan from the other . She sitting opposite me, stunning in her creamy white satin dress but her eyes were closed, her beautifully manicured fingers spread over her breasts. She beginning to pant, to gasp and even from the other side of the room I could see her whole body trembling. I found myself scissoring my stocking thighs together as I watched this beautiful woman surrender to a wave of pure pleasure , to a shuddering gasping wave of orgasm, Between my own squeezed thighs I could feel my pretty underwear now sodden wet . FIVE I must have dozed off, when I wake I am sitting on the white leather sofa next to Nineteen but what has happened to the room ! Is it even the same room? Its full of TV monitors , a man behind a control desk, about a dozen men, maybe one or two woman, sat in comfy chairs in a semi circle facing our sofa They are in shadow we sit under bright lights. What is all this ? A man in a black tie dinner suit is bending over me. He slaps my face, twice, not hard. “Come on sweet thing wakey wakey we are ready for you” He takes my arm and draws me to my feet. I find myself smoothing down the crumpled black satin of my dress, as always, wanting to look nice, He leads me to a circular raised box about 18 inches high and helps me up. The spot lights swivel to find me. A voice from a loudspeaker fills the room “Welcome ladies and gentlemen and to on line bidders. If you check the details you were sent this is Twenty Three . Being sold for normal use for a trial period of48 hours It’s part of her final training” Even my fuddled sex obsessed mind realised what happening. It an auction and I the one being sold! The circular stand began to slowly rotate completing a full circle. “As you see a fine body, particularly good arse. Tits could be perkier ” There a muttering from the watching group “First round of bidding please” The watchers had tablets on their knees, I have no idea how much they were offering for me but the man at the control desk clearly did. The speaker crackled “Ladies and gentlemen we have our final four bidders who have been notified.” Another flurry of chatter “ All are on line None sadly here in person.” “But, as regulars among you will know the next stage of the auction is to provide additional information and demonstration. Each final round bidder has submitted one request. Those of you here in person may not have successfully bid but you should find the next stage amusing” A pause Drinks being served. I blinked into my shadowy surroundings but didn’t notice the man who approached me from one side and without a word unzipped my dress. He worked it down over my hips and I meekly stepped out of it as I did so I heard a soft whirring and up saw a shinny steel tube, like a trapeze handle had lowered down and swaying about a foot above me. Still no words were spoken as the man .deftly lifted my left hand. and attached my wrist to a cuff. Then my other hand I stretched tall, but not painfully so . In fact I found the posture strangely arousing. I scanned the watchers, trying to imagine what they saw beneath the searching spotlights . They would have seen a curvy blonde haired woman, dressed in gossamer fine lacey lingerie . Her full breasts lifted, aroused nipples clearly visible through the fine silk of her elegant bra. Her trimmed pussy, obvious through the lacey panties, already clearly clinging damply to her moist labia. Her toned legs clad in shimmering pure silk seamed stockings, held tautly in place my a gossamer laced suspender belt Ankles tensely arched in shinny black leather heels. The they could see clearly aroused. By then they kept me aroused 24/7 I remember. Again the loudspeaker . I feeling quite detached . as if I observing what happening to the bound blonde woman but the silky smooth voice brought me back to earth. “The first of our short list bidders code name Ai B has posted that he is impressed with 23’s breasts but would like to see how sensitive they are. That is easily done Al B. Simon, if you would be so kind” The man who had stripped me stepped into my line of sight. I aware of his lewd lecherous grin as hh lifted my full soft breasts free of the gossamer silk bra. Flicking both erect nipples I think I cried out. Then he appeared with a vibrator . It a huge thing . Gazing at that big domed head it had I could hear is insistent buzzing. I held my breath eyes on the buzzing head till the moment it touched my swollen left nipple and my body arched I think I cried out again as the vibrations coursed through my nipple, my breast and seemed to churn up my insides in a quivering spasm. Wide eyed, I gazed out at the watchers sitting in the surrounding shadows. Eyes blurred with tears as my suspended body bucked and jerked in a series of orgasms. As I recovered my senses I aware of the man lifting the bra cups back over my aching breasts My swollen throbbing nipples that now had metal clips pinching them maintaining the hot pulses of pleasure that led to my orgasms . Aware too of murmured chatter from the watchers, aware of my juices soaking my inner thighs Soaking warm and wet into the stretched welts of my stocking tops Then that damned loudspeaker “ I think we can safely say that twenty three’s response to breast arousal is a joy to behold ” SIX Weirdly I think I half dozed but I suppose my sated body was utterly exhausted. Through a haze I heard the blonde woman crying out and wondered what thy were doing to her . Her cries were pitiful , heart rending animal moans . I heard a gruff male voice mutter “The bitch has passed out” Then they came for me I came round quickly, suddenly aware of my surroundings. My sweaty lingerie clad body, the watchers, the lights , the men hovering around me and those vicious clips still on my swollen nipples I heard from the speaker “……. So again to No 23 and we are now at the stage of observing the sale lots being fucked” Hands on my arms and legs as I was laid on a rubber mat on the floor Cold clammy hard rubber cold through the flimsy silk. The hands held my wrists , my ankles, spread wide open on my back on the mat. Everyone gathered close, some had drawn up chairs other stood . I gazed up, into a sea of hungry stares. The room went quiet and I was aware of a tall slim man standing over me, between my legs. The loudspeaker “ Many of us know Leo I am sure, he has kindly offered to be our tester. Over to you Leo “ I gazed up at this tall slim young mixed race man, his naked body hairless, sheened in oil or sweat. His cock utterly awesome. Thick as my wrist and long . I gazed breathlessly as it swayed thick and heavy between his slim taut thighs , his ball sack big bulging The room was silent and the people holding me gripped my more tightly as Leo Lowered himself, holding his dark skinned body above me on his stretched arms. Surprisingly gently a hand drew the damp silk underwear aside and I moaned at the swaying brush of his cock head on my soaking swollen lips. His cock was now fully erect He didn’t need the usual guiding hand to present the gleaming domed head to my drooling opening and part my swollen silky lips. The massive dome stretched me open but he didn’t push up me Just waited, my whole body quivering., The watchers breathless The men holding my ankles drew my legs back, back almost to my shoulders Back and drawn to the side, and as they opened my eager body he pushed his enormous erection slowly slowly so so slowly up my soaking wet tunnel . It stretched, moving up me more and more of it stretching in an ecstasy of pain as he impaled me. My body exploded in a wild frenzy of pain, stretched full possessed pure pleasure and I heard a woman’s voice saying “Dear god she has taken all of it” I think lost all conscious control, my mind was a spinning wild maelstrom of screaming pleasure as I heaved and writhed, screamed and shuddered on that huge thrusting beast of a cock. While I was writhing and screaming he remained calm slowly drawing his shaft out of me then slowly deliberately burying the monster back . Again and again as my writhing sweating tortured body twisted against the firm grip of the four men holding me I was again teetering exhausted on the edge of some kind of madness when he suddenly withdrew completely and without ceremony I was dragged to me feet, and again suspended from stretched aching arms. Body jerking in after spasms. I dimly realised I was now naked. I heard a deep guttural animal moan of pain and realised that Leo was now taking the blond girl. |
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2/5/2022 8:07 am |
Amazing detail enjoying so far xx
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Fair weather and full sails to you Geri 
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Mmm loving your story so far, can't wait for the next instalment! Simon X
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A wonderful, thrilling read, Geri, it gets better and better as you immerse yourself as 23, as her training leads to her objectification, your descriptive writing is simply divine , as is your sense of honesty as you take on your new found role, "As you see a fine body, particularly good arse. Tits could be perkier" made me smile, and chuckle. The final scene of you been impaled by such a huge shaft, held down by four men was particularly arousing, I was stroking my Cock so hard, I let myself come as the visual imagery subsumed me in its joyous decadence. Maybe we could write something collaboratively in the future Geri.
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*smiles* Part two was even better than part one, Geri. Well done! As promised, I would like to give you my genuine feedback, this time focussed on your style and language. You are very good in building erotic tension and I like your choice of words and the level of details in your descriptions. And you never fall into the trap of becoming vulgar or blunt. You are painting a delicate picture of words, Geri. Storywise you know when not to describe something and leave it to the imagination of the reader to fill the gaps. That's something I had to learn the hard way  You are great at building tension and you are able to release that tension nicely but inbetween, there are often sudden jumps, for example when 23 orgasms so sudden and quickly that it takes away so much from that erotic joy of reading. Is that intentional? If not, that's a potential to improve in the future. I guess you are aware of the typos and grammar issues, no need to stress that here. I think that fixing some punctuation and Upper/lowercase issues would be an easy task and would greatly improve readability. I hope that you find my feedback helpfull and respectfull, as I hope to read so much more from you
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8/12/2022 2:58 am |
I enjoyed the read. I know why you are in so many rooms now.
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