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Blogs > boh99 > My Blog

boh99 68M
210 posts
4/22/2024 7:34 pm
106

don't Justify,
just juxtaposition
your skin to mine
warmth and electricity
enhance and mingle
like cocoa and cream
which always delights

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jenny14 75T  
90345 posts
4/22/2024 10:53 pm

 boh

This is another HOT piece
A life spent making mistakes is not only more honorable, but more useful than a life spent doing nothing. George Bernard Shaw

Jenny


boh99 replies on 4/23/2024 12:56 am:
Thanks, Jenny - A little alliteration too

Artschoolgrad 46M
8694 posts
4/23/2024 5:06 am

 glad you're back to writing! cocoa and cream. mmmm


boh99 replies on 4/24/2024 9:55 pm:
sometimes I feel illiterate, but I can still alliterate.

likeithot19 62M
6022 posts
4/23/2024 5:38 am

 love it!


boh99 replies on 4/24/2024 9:54 pm:
thanks so glad you stopped by

subdude2Bsubdued 76M
328 posts
4/23/2024 2:02 pm

 You poetize nicely, Boh. Well done! Not completely sure, though, why you chose to use the noun, juxtaposition, instead of the transitive verb, juxtapose.


boh99 replies on 4/24/2024 9:53 pm:
thanks - you're correct on that. I appreciate it. In the spirit of playfulness, I felt the position in juxtaposition implied her movement to him.

so glad you stopped by to read

best - boh

rydermantel 69M
25202 posts
4/26/2024 9:08 pm

 Really good. I like it. I like the metaphors.



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