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No Way Out - Belle de Jour - Jenny Some of my readers have found more enjoyable read the formatted, punctuated, version of my "No Way Out" story that I have posted in the "Erotic Stories" section of the Magazine. The original, posted earlier here, was created in a stream-of-consciousness, unpunctuated style as I raced to get written. For those of you new the story, revolves around the misfortune of a beautiful, successful young happily married woman makes one irretrievable mistake and involves an extensive cast of memorable characters, of a sort not usually found in stories on this site. (I should apologize for the first three chapters. It took me a while to get the spacing right. Someday I'll edit them.) The most satisfying part of writing this series has been the interchange I have enjoyed as a result with the women have followed the story. They are in many ways the actual lead character. I hope you will join their company, and the exchange of commentary that we have started together. For your convenience I have created an indexed link to these chapters below: No Way Out, Day One Parts 1 through 5 [group_post 4737] [group_post 4791] [group_post 4793] [group_post 4796] No Way Out - Day One (Part five) No Way Out - Day One (part 6) No Way Out - Day One (part 7) No Way Out - Day One (part  No Way Out - Day One (part 9) No Way Out - Day One (part 10) No Way Out - Day One (part 11) No Way Out - Day Two (part 1) No Way Out - Day Two (part 2) No Way Out - Day Two (part 3) No Way Out - Day Two (part 4) No Way Out, Day Two - Part 5 No Way Out - Day Two (part 6) No Way Out - Day Two (part 7) No Way Out - Day Two (part No Way Out - Day Two (part 9) No Way Out, Day Two - Part 10 No Way Out, Day Two - Part 11 No Way Out, Day Two - Part 12 No Way Out, Day Two - Part 13 No Way Out, Day Two - Part 14 No Way out, Day Two - Part 15 Belle de Jour Belle de Jour 2 Belle de Jour 3 [group_post 5451] Belle de Jour 5 Belle de Jour 6 [group_post 575705] [group_post 575785] [group_post 5792] [group_post 5794] [group_post 585876] [group_post 585978] [group_post 5867] [group_post 5798] [group_post 573082] [group_post 5731] [group_post 5735] [group_post 573725] [group_post 573727] [group_post 575702] [group_post 577800] [post 964663] |
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Thank you for posting these stories.
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Thank you for posting these stories.
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had not seen this before. looking forward to read!
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had not seen this before. looking forward to read!
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Glad you're enjoying it. I'm sorry I never finished it. I know how it ends, I just lost my muse. There are endless pages of great scenes rattling around in my head that will probably never see the light of day. But with all the chapters I did write, I don't feel like I let anyone down, at least I hope not.
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Nice pic. Enticing! I was surprised and delighted to see your comment here. I just found and copied out your story in the magazine yesterday, but didn't read it or leave a comment until today. Sweet! I look forward to future installments. Feel free to borrow anything you like in my stories for your upcoming chapters. Do you actually visit the US, or was that just a plot device? We'll have to compare notes about what you need, what you want to have done to you. Meanwhile, I'm glad you found my stories so . . . relief inciting.
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I soooo hope you come back online soon and get in touch with me. I too have a cabin (more rustic than yours, though) in Upper Bucks County. Fireplace. hot tub, woodburning stove. Living here for now until my place in Doylestown is ready for me to move in. You are in my head. I'm getting my body back in great shape (husband died of Lou Gehrig's disease, and I focused on taking care of him and neglected myself). Massage, pilates, yoga, walks along a nearby lake,and a coach who requires I send a phone photo of my feet on the scale. Healthy diet, no alcohol (which I self-medicated with for a bit and put on pounds from that as well...) I just found this site Monday night and didn't sleep until 9pm last night! I've always enjoyed erotica, but this is a whole new world for me. I hope you get back online soon. Real soon. Please? I'm on pins and needles. I am soooo ripe. But need time to adjust and be the woman who makes you hot with her imagination as well...Please? Maybe chat for a while. And, if I'm good (reaching personal goals) and behave as you wish, we could talk on the phone for Valentine's Day for the first time. Talk and continue to adjust until April. Then, if you want, you'll allow us to set up a face to face for a glass of wine at a country Inn. Check out the chemistry and go from there. Please??  Still takes a while to get it warmed up when it's been empty for a few days in below-freezing weather. Cathedral ceilings give me lots of passive heat through the wall of South-facing insulated windows, but make the two wood stoves work overtime.Interesting proposal, cravin', and a practical timeline. I prefer to have a playmate close at hand, but I don't mind a little flirtatious online or telephone foreplay. Set up a blog and a private mailbox, like mine Private Messages, and we can exchange contact info. I find Yahoo is better than alt. for long-distance email or chats, but alt. gets nervous if we jump into that too quickly. If you prove to be suitably adaptable and malleable, perhaps we can work something out.
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1/10/2012 10:19 am |
I soooo hope you come back online soon and get in touch with me. I too have a cabin (more rustic than yours, though) in Upper Bucks County. Fireplace. hot tub, woodburning stove. Living here for now until my place in Doylestown is ready for me to move in. You are in my head. I'm getting my body back in great shape (husband died of Lou Gehrig's disease, and I focused on taking care of him and neglected myself). Massage, pilates, yoga, walks along a nearby lake,and a coach who requires I send a phone photo of my feet on the scale. Healthy diet, no alcohol (which I self-medicated with for a bit and put on pounds from that as well...) I just found this site Monday night and didn't sleep until 9pm last night! I've always enjoyed erotica, but this is a whole new world for me. I hope you get back online soon. Real soon. Please? I'm on pins and needles. I am soooo ripe. But need time to adjust and be the woman who makes you hot with her imagination as well...Please? Maybe chat for a while. And, if I'm good (reaching personal goals) and behave as you wish, we could talk on the phone for Valentine's Day for the first time. Talk and continue to adjust until April. Then, if you want, you'll allow us to set up a face to face for a glass of wine at a country Inn. Check out the chemistry and go from there. Please??
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Actually, darlin', I think it is much better in this case to go in order. I'm trying to keep this from being your ordinary garden-variety erotic schlock. I'm trying to make kitten into someone you can identify with. I want who you are at the beginning of the story to have a very real impact on how you react and what happens to you not only in the segments I have already written, but in those I would like to write, if I can ever get back into writing any more of this. (That, in turn, will depend heavily on whether I can find new inspiration, and that, unfortunately, depends on finding just the right muse, and those are in noticeably short supply in my recent experience.)
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Thank you very much for a great and very hot read. Are there more to come? I'm very curious to find out how it ends if it does. Thanks again. You have the makings of a great erotica story ready for publishing. I have to weigh my nebulous rewards as a writer of erotica against the cost. So far, the rewards don't seem great enough. I can't just function on this cyber level. I need reality.
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Afraid you may have to wait, darlin'. I have the next segment ready, but I don't know what the one after that is going to be. I don't want to commit myself to a plot course that is going to lead me into a cul-de-sac. I intend to take you into deeper waters, but with a purpose. I know what the purpose will be. Now I have to make the narrative serve that end. I'm probably just over-thnking this. I write best when I just let the story flow, but I also write best when I am inspired, and right now I'm not. Just kicking back and enjoying another god-damned beautiful day in the mountains. The lake is calling. See ya! Going swimming.
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omg just read 1-11 back to back and talk about hot, you had some of my fantasies included. Just wish it didn't seem to end at such a good point. Any chance of a sequel?
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